Acoustic Sensitivity

This space is filled with endless rests; a caesura would have been more kind. I count them I love that line. It's also the first time I've ever read a ...

The fire mocks me Provides warmth That will not Penetrate The skin Lost among the Times when I Could still Bear to Stick around These first two lines were good ...

avoidong I just wanted to point that one grammatical error. I love your poem especially this line. What's the dying all for? It was never like this before. Sailors whispered ...

I don't get it too. It's like a soldier carrying an AK-47 fighting a gladiator carrying a sword riding on a giant dragon in the world of Apocalyptic Future where ...

Yeah the storyline is okay. I can tell that the girl really likes the boy and it's a one-sided love but born out of frustration but it annoys me a ...

I agree with Via. There's no element that makes it sound spectacular. It's kind of plain.

When at last the sailing ship’s voyage ends, And her anchor makes home in safe harbor, The dark-haired girl steps from the deck to dock, Where merchants, sailors, and city ...

Straight from the heart, mate...

Southern Lights of the Night Sky The colors swirl above the sky At around the month of April. The sun had set But the moon never went To the place ...

Silence Before the Storm Calm as the wind, Like the leaves falling right now Calm as the water, So clear as it is seen like now Peace like this doesn't ...

Nice choice of words but still it doesn't beat the original lyrics of Teenagers by MCR. Go MCR!

Nice song especially for a ballad eventhough I'm not much of a fan of it...

The Road to Home I am walking down this lonely road Striving to find the way My way back home Tell me where to head? Tell me where to go? ...

Yeah the beginning's a bit awkward but the chorus is good.

That was funny and yeah, Superman can't outrun the Flash...XD!